Questions:

1. Does my story make sense/ is it easy to understand?

2. Do my character designs go with the motif of the story?

3. Does this sound like a film you would like to watch?

Feedback:

Overall the feedback I received was positive. Everyone seemed to understand my story and said that it was easy to follow once I told them about it. They story is longer so it takes a bit to explain, but it was meant to be made into a stop motion film. So it will take a bit more to understand than an animates short. A lot of people said that my story was grim, so the character designs and palette and overall feel I described to them went with the story perfectly. Everyone I asked seemed to like the ideas I have for my story and are excited to see my final piece. 

Schedule:

Week 1- Have both Leonard and Everton sculptures finished and ready to casted and molded. 

Week 2- Have molds done and have foam latex figures made. 

Week 3- Have figures completely painted and clothed. (I have to make the clothes for the dolls) Begin working on stop motion scene. 

Week 4- Continue to work on stop motion clip. 

Week 5- Have clip edited and ready to present.

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